Some people argue that technological inventions such as mobile phones making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?

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The technological advancements in the 20th century have been beyond our wildest expectations, and the phenomena like IT revolution has resulted in evolution of
platforms namely
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platforms, namely
,
facetime
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Facetime
face time
, video calls,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
, that has made face to face interaction possible, even while sitting in any part of the world. Some critics assert that
this
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new way of
communication
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has a damaging effect on the social activity of the people, whereas I
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
disagree with
this
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and the essay will outline the benefits of the advanced way of
communication
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.
Firstly
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, the mobile
communication
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has made it possible to have video calls with a person,
may be
by chance
maybe
sitting in another country and it feels like that the person is sitting adjacent to us.
In other words
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, gone are those old days, when we have to wait for years to meet our near and dear ones. Now a days friends
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,
for instance
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,
creates
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create
are creating
whatsapp
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group and do group video calls,
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their old friendships are intact even, if they are living across the globe.
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, due to hectic lifestyle no one has time to visit each other physically, so people with common interests creates a group
on
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of
social media applications and interact on the fly.
Secondly
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, since the internet has provided certain platforms, where we can meet new people with
same ideology
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the same ideology
as ours, so the social circle of an individual grows. A good example of
this
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can be the Facebook, it provides facility to create groups like arts club, cricket club
etc
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and stranger
join
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joins
these
plural of that
those
considering their common interest, so they meet up and
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expands their social circle.
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, some people meeting up through the internet have ended by marrying each other. So, not only friends, it bolsters in building life long relations. To conclude, the new way of
communication
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is lightening fast, thereby reducing the long distance to just a press of a button. It is a more
convinent
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convenient
than the old method since it saves lots of time and energy as you do not need to see each other
for
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in
a conversation.
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