Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth.

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Education

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is the best gift for the human to incline higher social statue, which means someone who is the inferior position in the

society

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can assure to change their terrible situations as well as their human rights and, deteriorated social and economic infrastructures.

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opportunities for

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may release many negative things, especially economic problems, from weaker.All burdens of stress and hardness relevant to

society

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always fetter human life.

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, all things of

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resolved by

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are overestimated or do not accept the current situation.

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essay will be written for two reasons.

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with, unlike the past,

education

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is not a key to escape from the poor class. As seen an example of that, there are so many employees having an academic background.

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means educations are no longer attached by employers or business markets. So, It is better to find another way that may distinguish me from rivals than focusing on

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. Another reason is that

education

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price is too high to achieve the goal deserved as a successful life from

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, completing the total

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course is annually 3000 pounds in a year, In the Korean version. For four years.

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, including living expenses, cost of transportation, cost of rent in a house, and so on, massive price is paid to students,

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they allege to do both work and study, which casts overburden on younger having a not rich family background. So most of them have debts which may threaten their life for the whole lifetime.

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, the analysis of educations to give hope to common people would make them spoiled and lead to worse situations. All things considered,

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is not the only solution for the poorer to take from their miserable situation now.

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, the government and the social groups consider diverse methods for them

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as finding new job or market, leading new technologies to them in acceptable with their characters and aptitudes

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

325 words

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social mobility
personal and professional development
overall development
equality
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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth.

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries,the gap between rich and poor is widening. What problems does this create? What measures can be taken to address this issue?

In many countries, children spend longer hours on their homework. Some people think less homework can help to reduce the stress of the children and give them chance to develop their other skills. Do you agree or disagree.

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Many people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and public transport. Do you agree or disagree?

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