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In many countries people have extremely high incomes compared to the rest of population .Some people believe that is good while others say that the government should not allowed this to happen.Discuss

#countries #people #incomes #rest #population #government
Some people consider that high incomes
is
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are
 good
.
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.
On other contrary, high salary should be give which require hard-working and
extra ordinary
beyond what is ordinary or usual; highly unusual or exceptional or remarkable
extraordinary
 job. From one angle, some people believe that government
restrict
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restricts
 people who can able to work rather than disabled people.
Moreover
 a great amount of
budgets needs
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budgets, needs
 to the other sector of great
significance
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significance, such
such
 as
education health
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education, health
 and military system which will benefit everyone.
Furthemore
in addition
Furthermore
 the government of some developing countries
can not
can not
cannot
 manage to provide high salary packages. From another angle other jobs have many difficulties than others.
Furthemore
in addition
Furthermore
 nowadays
coranavirus
relating to or characteristic of carnivores
carnivorous
 covering all
part
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parts
 of
world
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the world
 we can see only duties medical and military officer.They are working until
sun
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the sun
 is shining end
mid night
12 o'clock at night; the middle of the night
midnight
.In my opinion government should give
award
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an award
the award
awards
 their brave.
On the other
hand
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hand, this
this
 fact that income disparities have been growing markedly. To
conclude in
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conclude, in
 my view an individual who has worked hard and has turn made them into skilled workers must surely be paid
high salary
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a high salary
high salaries
.

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