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Education is not luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Despite a continuing improvement in standard of
education
, many people believe that fees of
education
 should be abolished. I partially agree with
this
 view,
in particular
 the primary level of
education
 should be free for everyone.
To begin
 with, it is apparent from the human tendency that in case of anything being cheaper or free, the quality declines. The same can be the case with
education
. The higher educational institutions require immense effort in order to acquire knowledge
that is
 why curiosity and putting the minds of students are significant features of studying there.
However
, if there is not tuition fee in universities, the desire of students will be lost.
Furthermore
, making higher
education
 free would lower the motivation of professors and leaders, because of the fact that their salary will be decreased respectively. As a consequence, these two factors of free
education
 in institutes would be the key to low productivity.
On the other hand
, free
education
 could be the motivation for pupils to study in higher institutes. By accepting the idea of free
education
, the equality between both lower and upper social classes students will be maintained.
Hence
, less-affluent students would be inspired to study with knowing that they are as privileged as their peers from richer backgrounds, they will try to gain greater academic achievements. In conclusion, while state-subsidized higher
education
 will work, the government should take into consideration the repercussions of
this
 and
then
 accept the view. From my point of view, free
education
 should be received as suitable in primary schools and colleges, not in universities due to poor quality which would be caused by that.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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