The table gives information about railway system of 6 cities
The table chart delineates data on underground rail networks in six cities.
railway networks of
Overall
, the largest figures refer to London, Paris and Tokyo,Correct article usage
the
three
other cities are smaller and serve Correct article usage
the three
less
people.
The London Change the quantifier
fewer
underground
is the oldest Change the capitalization
Underground
system
, having been opened in 1863. It is also
considered as
the largest Change preposition
apply
system
with 394 kilometres
of route.The second
largest railway network, in Paris, is approximately half size of London
undergroundCorrect article usage
the London
,
but serves more people every year.Remove the comma
apply
Although
Tokyo
Correct article usage
the Tokyo
system
is the third
in terms of size, it is the most used one with 1972 million passengers per year.
Moving on to three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is quite larger with 126 kilometres
of route, compared with 11 kilometres
and 28 kilometres
for Kyoto and Los Angeles, respectively.
The Kyoto system
is the smallest which serves only 45 million passengers on a yearly basis, the Los Angeles underground railway network is the newest that
was opened in 2001.Correct pronoun usage
which
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Vocabulary: Replace the words system, kilometres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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