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It is argued that parents of children who break the rules should be punished in some ways as parents are responsible for the children’s actions. The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.

It is argued that parents of children who break the rules should be punished in some ways as parents are responsible for the children’s actions. The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
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The bar chart compares the numbers of
prisoners
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 between 1930 and 1980 in five different countries, namely Great
Britain
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, Australia, New
Zealand
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, the United States and Canada.
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at
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a glance at the graph reveals that
imprisonment
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the imprisonment
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figure
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 in the USA and UK climbed over the period and in Canada, Australia,
New
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and New
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Zealand
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, it actually declined. It is clearly seen that the United States had the highest
number
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 of inmates.
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, there was the lowest
figure
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 in
Britain
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 in 4 out of 6 years. In 1930, the
number
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 of
prisoners
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 in the United States reached
the
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 highest peak, with 120
thousand
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prisoners
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,
then
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this
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 data increased significantly to increase a peak of 140
thousand
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 in 1980.
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,
Britain
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 had the lowest
figure
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of
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for
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prisoners
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 until 1970,
then
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 the
figure
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 jumped suddenly to reach 90
thousand
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. Canada had the highest
number
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 of
imprisonment
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imprisoned
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 in 1930 and 1960 with nearly 140
thousand
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 people
in
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each year. In 1970, the
number
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 of
prisoners
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 in Great
Britain
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, New
Zealand
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 and Australia was
same
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the same
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, about 70
thousand
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 people. In 1980, 50
thousand
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 of
the
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persons in New
Zealand
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 were put in prison which was the lowest
figure
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 in
this
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 year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words prisoners, britain, zealand, figure, number, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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