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"Time is money" give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience to what extant do you agree or disagree?

#time #money
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Some people as Benjamin said in his book “
time
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 is
money
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” believe that
time
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 is valuable as
money
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.
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, I think the
time
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 is more precious than
money
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. As a matter of fact, we cannot
use
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 the
money
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 to get back
ti
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me a
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the time
nd it lost forever.
Firstly
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,
time
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 is priceless in our
life
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. As you know
time
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 is moving ahead continuously and nobody cannot stop it or save it for the future, so we should exploit the
time
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 to gain our goals and aims in our
life
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.
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, understanding the value of
time
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 is essential to taste success in our
life
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. Due to the fact that
time
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 is limited and predestined, so people know a moment is gone never comes back, and we cannot come back
time
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 by
money
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, but when we lost our
money
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 we can earn it again;
therefore
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, we should be careful about using our
time
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 during
life
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.
In addition
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, managing
time
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 is an indispensable factor in
life
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 and we should spend our
time
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 efficiently and effectively, so every individual should prepare and follow a certain schedule to accomplish target;
also
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, different people have different goals in their
life
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 and the importance and irreplaceable of
time
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 is different for all of us.
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, students
use
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 the
time
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 for taking knowledge, working men
use
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 it to earn
money
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 and house ladies
use
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 the
time
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 to do their household.
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, we cannot spend
money
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 become knowledgeable and achieve our goals. In conclusion, the value and importance of
time
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 are much more than
money
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, since people know, cannot purchase
time
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 when consuming it, unlike
money
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,
time
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 can neither be earned nor saved for future
use
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. By taking the right actions at the right
time
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, we can make our
life
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 satisfactory and useful.
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