The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart represents the information on UAE government spending money from the budget of AED 315
billion
for different sectors in 2000.
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Overall
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government
spends the highest Add an article
the government
amount
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for
social security about more than the quarter Change preposition
on
amount
in total Use synonyms
while
the lowest supply was to transport services.
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It is clear that
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although
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the
social security costs 100 Correct article usage
apply
billion
, the Use synonyms
second
highest money went to health and personal social services with 53 Linking Words
billion
. At the same time, Education expends about 38 Use synonyms
billion
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the ministry spends almost equal Linking Words
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amount
for defence, Debt interest and other Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
expenditure
with nearly 23 Fix the agreement mistake
expenditures
billion
. Use synonyms
Further
, expenses for low and order and housing, heritage and environment were almost 16 million. Linking Words
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Finally
the lower number other than transport was to Add a comma
,Finally
industry
agriculture and employment.
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industrial
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, we can get a clear idea that Linking Words
union
gave more Fix the agreement mistake
unions
important
to social security. Replace the word
importance
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Also
spend a considerably higher Add a comma
,Also
amount
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of
health and personal social services and education.Change preposition
on
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