Many people wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case. It is a good thing or a bad thing.

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Wearing brand clothes
has been
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have been
had been
a usual habit in many communities. While the majority of people spend money on fashionable clothes far more than in the past. I personally believe that
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lifestyle is advantageous because it shows a person's personality.
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, it has some drawbacks which cannot be ignored. To commence with, wearing fashionable clothes is a good thing because it makes a person attractive and as well as well-mannered. Put simply, in today's world, clothes represent a person's dignity and respect. So, people wearing fashionable clothes are considered to be more respectful in the society.
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, a survey conducted in the Ambience mall Gurgaon, people who wear fashionable clothes get more attention from retailers.
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, most people want to look like their role models in the entertainment industry.
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is especially the youth who
spend
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has spent
a plethora of money
just to like the
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just like the
dress of their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
actor or musician.
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, 60% of teenage girls in India wear a similar dress as a female celebrity.
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,
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way of living can and has some cons.
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, individuals do not care about the quality of the fabric which they buy.
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, the material used in the dress can be far
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more important
than its brand name. To exemplify, A Zara brand shirt
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costs
100$, which is almost five times we pay for a Coach shirt, whereas the quality and longevity of the latter is far better than a
former
a person who operates a farm
farmer
.
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, there are bad people in society who cannot control themselves by seeing women wearing stylish and short dresses.
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course sometimes
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course, sometimes
causes sexual harassment
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of
women. Cutting the long story, in short, I would like to conclude that even though wearing stylish clothes have both positive and negative effects. So, it is
people's responsibility
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the people's responsibility
who
are wearing
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is wearing
the same.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • express individuality
  • boost confidence
  • self-esteem
  • social status
  • designer labels
  • cultural icons
  • art and creativity
  • financial strain
  • overspend
  • fast fashion
  • culture of waste
  • economic growth
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