IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 5.5

Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#communication
Verbal communication is considered to be a more important
skill
 than
written
Suggestion
is written
 one.
Although
 I believe so, the importance of writing
skill
 could not be ignored. In todays business world, skills
such
 as powerful presentation and persuading others have a growing number of fans.
This
 might be because there are countless moments in which ones need to convince others to dedicate a budget, accept a plan, or promote themselves to a higher level.
Moreover
, spoken communication
skill
 will
also
 help people to communicate with others in personal life. A vivid
example in
Accept comma addition
example, in
this
 matter would be the couples who are losing their marriage just simply because they are not able to talk to each other about their misunderstandings. If they have been able to put their thoughts and emotions into words and convey them to the other side, they will not suffer from the unpleasant moments of arguing.
On the other hand
, writing
skill
 would be highly important if a person wants to progress in the academic or work environment. If a student could not take care of their written homework or, in a higher level, their dissertations, there would be no achievement for them.
Additionally
, as long as most
of employees are asked
Suggestion
employees are asked
 to write
report
Suggestion
reports
 about their projects or daily routines, the writing will be highly demanded.
As a result
, while people are asked to do a wide range of activity both at schools and work environment, the importance of both abilities is as equal as each other. All in all, people's need for communication has caused them to develop different means for it.
however
Suggestion
However
, the differentiation between these means could not determine their importance over the others.
Submitted by vahid_kamand on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: