Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.

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The severity of penalties has been a highly discussed topic since centuries. It is thought by many people that criminals done the same actions should be punished equally without taking into consideration their motives or other relative circumstances.
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, it is suggested by the others that the motive behind each individual carrying out wrongful action, their situation and condition should be considered when giving punishment. In my opinion, even though fixed penalties may seem to have contributed to the encouragement of equality, regarding each individual's own condition when punishing the unlawful behaviour provides more just environment. Supporters of fixed penalties argue that in order to promote impartiality among wrongdoers there is a need to charge each of them by the same punishment. The judges might act arbitrarily and sometimes defectively when making a decision.
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happens when rulers give much more importance to their feelings than the existing fact.
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, there is a limited knowledge regarding the problem encountered.
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, the court is merely aware of the information which has shown them in the courtroom.
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may lead to false judgement and
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inaccurate penalties.
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, the ruler's decisions may be appealed by the other party and
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higher court reverses that judgement. Take,
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, a conducted study suggests that 38 percent of the
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year in Russia.
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, the concept of equality and the justice are not always overlap, the latter is a far wider and complex term. Every criminal has a different motivation and purpose of conducting a
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, treating them equally would contribute to the disruption of our morality and understanding of equality by culminating in unfairness.
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, a child who stole some milk from the supermarket and the person who steals some perfume or clothes should be punished distinctively, even the acts have the same name as theft from the perspective of law.
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, the society would be affected poorly. In conclusion, despite the possibility of the
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the necessity to prohibit those unfair conclusions, I believe that flexible and variable decisions better serve for justice and the existing moral values in a society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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