Some people think that it is better to build more public parks and sports facilities in new towns rather than shopping malls. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly considered by many that parks and the sports centres are beneficial for the local residents and

therefore

authorities should construct ample of those while building new cities.

However

, others tend to oppose

this

idea and believe that the shopping complexes are more significant. In my opinion, there should be

right mix

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the right mix

a right mix

of

both

as they

both

of them have their own unique importance in the people’s life. On the one side, those who opine that the sport complexes and recreational parks are important can easily point out its

health

benefits.

That is

to say, having

parks

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parked

in the community can aid people with the space to perform physical activities

such

as Yoga, Swimming, Jogging and running which

otherwise

, is

bit

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a bit

difficult in the congested cities. Certainly,

such

exercises are beneficial for the people because it helps them to stay fit, active and away from the

diseases including

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diseases, including

obesity and depression, despite having their

tiering

producing exhaustion

tiring

work life.

For instance

, according to the

world

everything that exists anywhere

World

Health

Organisation, major cities are most benefiting from the recreational parks because the high number of people have started visiting parks on a daily basis, resulting in

decrease

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a decrease

in their

health

issues.

On the other hand

, some people consider that the new cities should have more shopping malls than amusement

parks mainly

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parks, mainly

because it allows people to shop close to their hometown, which means they do not have to travel far from their residence to purchase essential items

such

as food and clothing.

This

not only saves the fuel

that is

needed for the travel, but

also

saves people’s time, which could be utilised in taking care of their

health

. To exemplify, according to the recent research conducted by the New York Times, having

shopping

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shopped

places close to the cities

are

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is

beneficial because it leaves enough time for people to run their essential errands after shopping. To conclude,

having

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will both parks and shopping malls near the hometown save

are both parks and shopping malls near the hometown saving

were both parks and shopping malls near the hometown saved

are both parks and shopping malls near the hometown saved

have both parks and shopping malls near the hometown saved

were both parks and shopping malls near the hometown saving

having both parks and shopping malls near the hometown save

both

parks and shopping malls near the hometown save people’s time and energy, so that they can concentrate on their

health

.

Therefore

, cities should have the right mixture of

both

for the development of the people.