Governments give lots of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Artists are very important in the society. They
not only play
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don't only play
crucial role
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a crucial role
in
arts
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the arts
, but
also
development
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the development
of the entertainment. They can act like mirrors of the cultures, they can showcase culture to
world
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the world
in a beautiful way. Some governments spend a
lots
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lot
of
money
on artists to
support
them. Some people argue it is a waste of
money
and that could have been spent better elsewhere. They don't
support
artists
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the artists
. I strongly oppose their argument. Artists are different types, there are painters, singers, actors, writers etc... All of them are helpful to the society in different ways. In fact, they are the reason for vast knowledge we
are having know
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know
are known
have known
. Writers and painters can showcase the present social conditions
to
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for
the
next
genarations
all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age
generation
by
thier
of them or themselves
their
work.
This
is the one of the best
way
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ways
that knowledge is shared to the future generations. Artists like actors can
also
provide entertainment. They can act in different roles, provides a lot of entertainment. They are the artists who always have celebrity status. Because of their great work of acting they can gain universal
recognistion
the state or quality of being recognized or acknowledged
recognition
. Spending
money
on artist's welfare is very useful. They need
support
not only from government, but
also
from society. Scientists
are always get
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are always getting
always get
have always gotten
have always got
a lot of
support
from everywhere, artists are as equal as scientists in the world. They promote our culture and our time. One artist can inspire millions of people and they can change their lives. Art never dies, we
appericiate
recognize with gratitude; be grateful for
appreciate
appreciated
the paintings of
Piccaso
prolific and influential Spanish artist who lived in France (1881-1973)
Picasso
even after a century. So there is nothing wrong in encouraging and supporting artists. To conclude, without art there is no meaning to the human life. Governments spend a
lots
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lot
of
money
on different things, spending on artists is really good thing.
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