Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up-to-date access to the news on the internet. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the
internet
has become popular in the world. Many people are watching the latest news on the internet
and newspapers are less important to young people. I strongly agreed with access to the latest news on the internet
.
The first
reason is watching the news on the internet
is convenient for viewers. Many people have a computer and phones so that they can view the latest news on the internet
anytime and anywhere and also
they can watch the news on the internet
when they have free time to view. For example
, some of the people are very busy and they have free time at night or after work. Other than that, some of the people just can watch the news when they cannot go out such
as in quarantine and so on.
The second
reason is watching the news on the internet
may not be charged the extra fees. Some of the people believe that watching the news on the internet
is free and no need to pay the fees. And the costs of newspapers are more expensive than the news on the internet
. For example
, if we want to watch the news in traditional newspapers, we have to go out and pay the fees of newspapers.
In conclusion, I agree to access to the latest news on the internet
. Although
the newspapers are popular, it also
will replaced totally by electronic sources like news on the internet
. The reasons are watching the news on the internet
is convenient for viewers and watching the news on the internet
may not be charged the extra fees.Submitted by cseechia09 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite