your local newspaper is holding a competition to find a person who has done the most to help the local community. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. in your letter name and describe the person you think should win say how you know this person explain how this person has helped the local community

Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you well and in the best spirits. I am writing

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letter to inform you about a person who I think will win the competition that you are planning to hold soon. I am Sam, working in your company. Yesterday, I came to know that you are going to hold a competition to find a person who is doing work for the welfare of society. I think Zen will be one of those

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who are helping society significantly via donations. Zen is my neighbour, and I know him closely. He made his public profile where he posted videos

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and photos when he did something for society. And encourage others to do the same. He loves to participate in volunteer work, whether it is for cleaning the parks, picnic spots or planting trees on roads.

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, he made a special place for people where he educates poor children, cares for the elders by providing basic necessities of life. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours sincerely, Sam.

kaurjagdeep2097

Jul 30, 2025

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Try to include more details about Zen’s impact on the community.

coherence

Use clear topic sentences to make your ideas stand out.

coherence

Break down your ideas into separate paragraphs for each point.

greeting and closing

Your opening and closing are polite and appropriate.

task achievement

You have a good idea about the person's contributions.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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