NIGERIAN UNIVERSITIES ARE OFTEN ON STRIKE. WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE THE BEST WAYS TO ADDRESS THE PROBLEMS FACING NIGERIA’S CURRENT EDUCATIONAL SYSTEM?

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Generally, the
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of
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in Nigeria is appalling, especially at the tertiary level. The fundamental challenges facing Nigeria's educational sector include inadequate funding, quaint academic curriculum, poor infrastructure,
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inadequacies, among others. In a bid to force the government to channel adequate resources to
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sector, academic and non-academic staff unions of
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universities
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have frequently embarked on strike actions. To address these challenges,
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the government should provide adequate funds and
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research facilities for conducive research, teaching, and learning. The funds should be properly monitored and accounted for to avoid mismanagement. Lecturers’ salaries and welfare
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should be improved to motivate them and enhance their workflow.
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, standard instructional materials and
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teaching aids should be provided to the lecturers.
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and the
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Universities
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Commission need to be committed to delivering a competitive and high-
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tertiary
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across the country. Lecturers should be of the highest
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.
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is achievable by employing only qualified individuals and,
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, providing periodical workshops and international fellowships to make them seasoned experts.
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will essentially grant
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students access to
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education
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from seasoned lecturers.
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the academic curriculum needs to be revised and improved upon to be of international standard. There should be
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reduction in the number of
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courses and
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increase in the courses for the teaching subjects. It needs to be more practical and research-based rather than just theoretical.
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, students’ admission into tertiary
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should be based on merit and not
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familiarity or through bribery and corruption. If these suggestions are considered and implemented, I am confident that the
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of
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in
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universities
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will greatly improve.
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, strike actions by the academic and non-academic staff unions in
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universities
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will no longer be commonplace.
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