The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

It is commonly believed by most people that the most urgent

issue

that

government

and private sectors have to tackle on is to find the alternative energy solution apart from the fossil fuels as they cause the severe

environment

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environmental

problem

such

as global warming. While others think that there are far more critical social issues that need to concern. In my opinion, I agree with the

later

referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)

latter

argument and will outline the reason as

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follows

.

To begin

with, people have

perception

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the perception

a perception

that the main cause of global warming, which damage wildlife and lead to other serious

environment

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environmental

problem

such

as

firebush

something that is free (usually provided as part of a promotional scheme)

freebies

in Australia, occurs from

large amount

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the large amount

a large amount

of consumption

in

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of

fossil fuel.

However

, research from the Imperial university reveals that only 25% of the

realeasing

emotionally purging (of e.g. art)

releasing

in greenhouse gas, which is the main factor of rising temperature,

are produced

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is produced

from traditional fuel from industrials and business.

Furthermore

, there are many factors that contribute to

this

environment

issue

;

for example

, agriculture process and food consumption, which accounted more than the generation and consumption of fuels.

As a result

, if people want to help the

environment

and reduce the chance of global warming, they should spend time focus on other causes than energy generation from fossil. Another important point is that there are far more serious social issues that

government

and individuals need to

urgent

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urgently

tackle

such

as health service and

economy

.

For instance

, the situation of spreading

covid

having or marked by a curve or smoothly rounded bend

curved

-19 virus, which cause more than hundred thousand of

death toll

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the death toll

in many countries around the world. The pandemic

also

cost

trillion

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a trillion

of dollar

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lows

in

world

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the world economy

economy

as cities are locked down and all businesses are closed.

This

clearly show that public sector

need

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needs

to quickly respond to

this

severe

issue

due to the rising of unemployment rate.

Therefore

,

government

agency

need

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needs

to help improve its national health service and enhance its

economy

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economic

situation before it faces great depression. In conclusion,

although

government

and business sector should spend their budget to develop

new energy solution

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new energy solutions

a new energy solution

for saving the

environment

, I strongly believe that both critical health

issue

and severe

economy

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economic

situation have to solve as the

first

priority.