A friend you made while you were studying abroad would like to spend a semester studying in your country. He/She has written to ask for your advice. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter 1. Describe why you think he/she will enjoy it 2. Explain why you recommend studying at your university 3. give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear_________,
Dear John,
I hope you are doing well. I got excited to hear that you have made up your mind to continue one of your semesters at the Indian
University
.
I am sure you will be going to enjoy this
journey because the Indian education system is one of the best in the whole world.
Moreover
, I would recommend you choose Punjab University
which is located in the capital of Punjab. It is also
my former University
. I spent three years of my bachelor's at this
University
. Apart from that, this
University
also
provides Fix the agreement mistake
scholarships
scholarship
to merit students and you are one of the toppers in a Canadian College.
You will get easy admission because Fix the agreement mistake
scholarships
this
college provides NRI seats too. You can check every single detail on the university
website such
as course details, and timetable of the courses. The address of the website is www.punjabuniversity.in. There will be a separate section for admission. All you have to do is to fill in the details and submit it. It will take more than fifteen days for the response.
See you soon.
Your lovingly.
Harpreet.Submitted by harpreet291kaur on
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Task Achievement
To improve task achievement, try to delve deeper into the specific benefits or experiences your friend might have studying in your country or at your university. For example, mention specific programs, cultural exposure, or opportunities for research that stand out.
Coherence and Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, work on connecting your ideas more fluidly between paragraphs. Use more linking words or phrases that indicate contrast, addition, or cause and effect. This can enhance the reader's understanding and improve the flow of your letter.
Task Achievement
Ensure that the advice section is comprehensive. While you provided information on how to apply, including tips on preparing for interviews or recommendation letters could be beneficial.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite