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Marathi Nations should assist poor countries with humanitarian relief during natural disaster do you agree or disagree with the statement

#marathi #nations #countries #relief #disaster
Responsibility to help the countries which are being struck upon by the natural disaster to help their citizens for their well being.
This
 essay agrees with the statements because financially strong countries are able to spend their money with negligible effect on the economy.
these
Suggestion
These
 countries have an abundance of resources available compared to the developing ones. Helping Nations have much higher rates of GDP these countries are mostly investing their money to grow for the technological on the other side poor countries are struggling for their daily needs unfortunately when
such
 countries are under uncontrollable natural forces it is very beautiful
such
 circumstances will make the condition more measurable for these poor countries
this
 is the
time
 for being considerate and courageous to release some of the resources for the needed one. India is being very well known country for
this
 helping behaviour. Developed countries
also
 have plenty of all the resources
a part
separated or at a distance in place or position or time
apart
 from money to help others with eatables and medicines are the top most weird thing during the stuff
time
 the wildlife is
also
 affected ever
adversely which
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adversely, which
 can affect the ecological balance of the affected area so it is possible to reduce the loss if 8 is provided in
time
 many of the countries were able to survive
this
 unfavourable condition of climate as Thailand due to availability of the sport from the other countries. In conclusion to
this
 statement I would like to say the Government of rich
countries countries
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countries, countries
 save the capability to support the Wicker countries by adding them with monetary
funds along
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funds, along
 with
this
 day can share their hold of the resources in
such
 crucial
time
.
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