The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart compares the yearly
number
of
visitors
in
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3 different museums from 2007 to 2012.
Overall
, the peak of
visitors
'
number
was in 2012,
while
the lowest point was in 2009 and 2010. Victoria and Albert
Museum
was the most popular from 2007 to 2009. During 2007-2008 its annual
number
of
visitors
remained constant at about 14
million
people per year.
However
, the figure started to decline rapidly in 2009, and reached its lowest point of about 8
millions
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in 2010, becoming the least popular
museum
for the rest of the period. After that, the
number
of Victoria and Albert
Museum
's
visitors
gradually rose
up
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to 10
million
visitors
within 2 years. British
Museum
was the
second
most popular in 2007, being outraced by Victoria and Albert
Museum
.
Nevertheless
, its
number
of
visitors
experienced a sharp fall in 2008 and remained unchanged the following year.
Then
, the figure started to increase. It reached its peak of approximately 14
million
visitors
in 2012, regaining its position of 2007. National Gallery
Museum
showed the most notable development with
a
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steady growth throughout the period. Being the least popular
museum
in the beginning, it experienced a growth of more than 10
million
visitors
over
6-year
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period
,
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and became the
most visited
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museum
in 2012.
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