The charts below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

The charts below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
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The pie chart compares the use of four different means of transport in Edmonton, and the table illustrates the reasons for driving a
car
inside the city.
Overall
, cars are by far the most popular mode of travel, and the most common explanation for using
this
type of vehicle is to commute to work at the time surveyed. It is noticeable from the pie chart that most of the transport in Edmonton is done by
car
and by Light Rail Transit.
In particular
, the former accounts for 45% of the city transportation,
while
the latter is used by 35% of travellers. Meanwhile, buses and taxis share the same figure
of
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passengers, with 10% each. Regarding the reasons for using the
car
, more than half (55%) drive their
car
to work, followed by 45% for business purposes. Ranked
third
is the figure for those taking their children to school, recorded at 40%.
However
,
this
type of vehicle is least used for going shopping and engaging in leisure activities, with just 15% in each category.
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