You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear

Ms.

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Johnson, I am a student living in two sharing college

room

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rooms

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. The purpose of

this

letter is to get your attention towards(to) the difficulties and problems in

this

arrangement.

Although

the rooms and other facilities of accommodation

is

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satisfactory, there is a problem with my roommate. She is extremely disorganized and overly socialite. As she is tremendously cluttered, my

room

is always untidy

therefore

I am not able to find my belongings.

Furthermore

, I must clean my

room

frequently without her help because of

this

my study is getting affected. Repeated visit of her friends, constant parties and playing high pitch music on

radio

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is influencing my studies and sleep timings.

Moreover

, she makes use of my things without consulting me which is truly impolite. I would request you to change my

room

or to change

roommate

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my roommate

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. Preferably, to give me a single sharing accommodation that will help me to concentrate more on

the

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studies. l looks forward to receiving your response on

this

. Kind Regards, Meghna Chapaneria