The table gives the information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.

The table gives the information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.
The given table illustrates the five different forms of
transport
registered in Australia in three years (2010, 2012 and 2014).
Overall
, five means of registered
transport
witnessed an increase, and motorcycles gained in popularity in Australia over the period shown. In 2010, the number of passenger vehicles registered held the lion’s share (11.8
million
), which was nearly fivefold that of commercial vehicles (2.3
million
). Four years later, the former and the
later
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increased to 13
million
and 2.7
million
respectively (the change rates were 10.2% and 17.4% in that order). A similar pattern was seen
to
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heavy
truck
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, from 384
thousand
to 416
thousand
, and
the
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Australian paid less attention to
this
transport
at the end
of the survey. Turning to other means of
transport
, it is noticeable that motorcycles gained in popularity in Australia, the number of people using
this
vehicle increased by 30.8%, from 540
thousand
to 709
thousand
over the surveyed period.
In addition
, light trucks
also
witnessed a considerable increase (23.5%), it was registered
about
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106
thousand
in 2010 and
then
experienced a jump to 131
thousand
in 2014.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, million, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • trends
  • registration
  • vehicles
  • comparison
  • categories
  • growth
  • decline
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • surge
  • consistent
  • pattern
  • speculate
  • factors
  • economic conditions
  • consumer preferences
  • advancements
  • technology
  • implications
  • infrastructure
  • environment
  • societal behaviors
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