The table gives the information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.

The table gives the information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.
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The given table illustrates the five different forms of
transport
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registered in Australia in three years (2010, 2012 and 2014).
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, five means of registered
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witnessed an increase, and motorcycles gained in popularity in Australia over the period shown. In 2010, the number of passenger vehicles registered held the lion’s share (11.8
million
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), which was nearly fivefold that of commercial vehicles (2.3
million
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). Four years later, the former and the
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increased to 13
million
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and 2.7
million
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respectively (the change rates were 10.2% and 17.4% in that order). A similar pattern was seen
to
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heavy
truck
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, from 384
thousand
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to 416
thousand
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, and
the
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Australian paid less attention to
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transport
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at the end
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of the survey. Turning to other means of
transport
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, it is noticeable that motorcycles gained in popularity in Australia, the number of people using
this
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vehicle increased by 30.8%, from 540
thousand
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to 709
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over the surveyed period.
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, light trucks
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witnessed a considerable increase (23.5%), it was registered
about
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106
thousand
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in 2010 and
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experienced a jump to 131
thousand
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in 2014.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, million, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • trends
  • registration
  • vehicles
  • comparison
  • categories
  • growth
  • decline
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • surge
  • consistent
  • pattern
  • speculate
  • factors
  • economic conditions
  • consumer preferences
  • advancements
  • technology
  • implications
  • infrastructure
  • environment
  • societal behaviors
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