International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. Discuss both views and then give your opinion.

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International Marketing is gaining widespread popularity as more and more multinational companies enter untapped foreign markets. While it might have its own benefits many would consider it as an act of invasion by the
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. In spite the advent of
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products inciting curiosity amongst the scientific community of the consumer
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, its effect on indigenous industries if far more devastating and in my opinion must be considered as an intrusion into the economy. The supply of foreign products through its marketing in different markets have some positive implications towards the community. As every products development or innovation in based on the shortcomings of its already existing counterpart, it adds value to it, and when
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products make their way into foreign markets they are easily accepted by the consumers.
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pushes the consumer
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's innovators to develop it
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to well meet their own needs
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spreading knowledge, culture etc.
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, after the launch of the
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LED bulb in Indian
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by AP Lightings Ltd, many Indian entrepreneurs sprung up with more efficient options of the bulb, well suited for Indian use.
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, the impact of
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intrusion cannot be neglected. As these goods and services make their way into the
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market they
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market, they
severely affect the indigenous industries.
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is mainly because the outsider's products are often advertised as having unique features along with it being cheaper and more reliable than the in-house developed alternative.
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, after the advent of synthetic cloth
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, particularly nylon which had a peculiar shine, greatly impacted the Indian Khadi textile mills, plunging their
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share down from 60% to mere 10% in just three years. In conclusion, international marketing has its own benefit
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as encouraging the scientific temperament of the
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consumed
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whereas it poses a grave danger for the home grown industries as their sales and revenue plummets. In my opinion, the foreign products have great potential to disrupt the in-house manufacturing units and must be considered as an invasion and an intrusion into the nation.
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