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motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. what are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

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It is obvious that the number of different means of transport has been increasing rapidly these days,
also
 highways are being expanded everywhere.
Although
motorways allow
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motorways, allow
 drivers to travel comfortably and shorten the long distance, there
are
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is
also
 a range of significant problems.
This
 essay will discuss some of these problems in detail, and
then
 propose some corresponding solutions. One of the major problems that motorways bring is accidents because of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 at high speed, particularly in bad weather or at crossroads. In Germany,
for instance
, more than half of the total length of the Autobahn highways has no speed limit,
this
 means that some cars with extremely powerful engines can reach a speed of over 300 km/h.
As a result
, many serious accidents might happen and cause severe damages to people and vehicles. To solve
this
 situation, the government should set speed limits for each kind of vehicle, exhibit traffic signs, and tighten the permission of driving license. It is undeniable that air and noise pollution should be considered as worth mentioning issues. The exhaust fumes from vehicles could cause air pollution, and as a consequence, people are increasingly suffering from respiratory diseases
such
 as pneumonia or asthma.
Also
, due to the enormous increase in engines’ sound and car honks, noise pollution might lead to some physical and mental illnesses including sleep disorder, depression, or even hearing-impaired situations. These problems could be dealt with by constructing freeways far away from residential areas and manufacturing
environmentally
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environment
-friendly vehicles. In conclusion,
although
 it is clear that highways cause a variety of problems, these issues are undoubtedly possible to be tackled.
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