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Some people believe that taxing companies ,which cause it ,is the best way to reduce industrial pollution while some suggest that there are several other ways to solve this trouble .Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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Some individuals are of the opinion that industries which cause
pollution
 should be taxed heavily so as to reduce
pollution
,
Accept space
,
whereas others opine that
pollution
 should be controlled by other means.
This
 essay intends to discuss both perspectives. I,
however
, side with the latter view Those who are in favour of taxing companies say so because it is these companies which cause
pollution
 and they should pay for cleaning it up. The ordinary people should not have to pay for it through taxes. Obviously, if government pays for it, it would be through the common man's pocket.
On the other hand
, other methods to deal with the situation would be better.
This
 is because it would be very difficult to judge which industries are causing how much
pollution
. They would all shrug
off
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of
 their shoulders and that would make
matter
Suggestion
matters
 worse.
Secondly
, these companies would claim that they are already paying a lot of taxes and so it becomes the government's responsibility. Other methods should be used to tackle
this
 problem.
To begin
 with, the government can make it mandatory for these industries to set up effluent-
treatement
care provided to improve a situation (especially medical procedures or applications that are intended to relieve illness or injury)
treatment
treatments
 plants. Government can
also
 give them subsidies for
such
 projects.
This
 would ensure that these effluents don't contaminate the underground water. These industries should
also
 be encouraged to plant trees. They should have a green belt all around them so that the trees absorb all carbon dioxide liberated To conclude, taxing the industries would not work as a good solution for reducing
pollution
 and other methods should be looked into.

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