Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

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Nowadays the big problem in urban areas all around the world was more

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because of more facilities provided by the urban centres.

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essay will examine the main causes of overpopulation and possible solutions to

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problem. The two main causes of overpopulation are more job opportunities and good schooling facilities for people than in rural areas.Most people come to the cities for job and

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earn more money.Because of no companies and industries in rural areas.A recent survey conducted by the popular private organization about urban area

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.It is found that more

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is due to more employment opportunities.And another reason for overpopulation is not having good education facilities in rural areas.That's why students move to cities for good quality education and for other services.

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, most people in urban areas were students and they came to cities for higher education. And some possible solutions to

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problem is providing more industries and companies in rural areas and providing schools with good schooling.People have more career opportunities in their local areas,

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they won't migrate to urban areas.

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, a recent survey conducted by the university of curtain concluded that japan becomes more developed country because of providing more job facilities in rural areas.

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, providing more schools in rural areas which reduce the

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in urban areas.

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is important to develop rural areas to stop traffic jam in urban centres. To conclude, urban areas having more facilities than rural areas are the main cause.

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, providing more schools and industries in rural areas can lessen the people in urban centres.

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Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

You recently registered for a course and you cannot attend the class for some reasons. Write a letter to your course instructor, and in your letter Introduce yourself. Explain the situation. and say what action you would like to take.

People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.