Television programs and movies have become saturated with violent content.What are some resulting social problems and how can we deal with them?

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Today’s people are surrounded with a bulk of television programs, movies, or TV series with various contents. Violence is one of the ubiquitous themes in the film industry and along with huge interest of the audience, it paves the way for

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essay along with some possible solutions that can be implemented in order to alleviate the problem. One of the problems of utmost importance is that people who watch films or TV programs that contains violent scenes can be inclined to do similar violation of the law,

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as robbery or murder attempts, because beholders of the films think that it is something as easy as in films. One thing they do not understand is that real

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is far more different than those in movies. Take a worldwide famous Spanish made

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De Papel”, or in English, “Money Heist” as an example. In

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tv show, a group of people gather and crate a gang and with Salvador Dali masks on their faces, rob Bank of Spain with a genius, quite long-prepared plan of the character called El Professor. It is not surprising that after these tv series, different people from different part of the world tried to do robbery with the same red jumpsuits and Dali masks. The only solution here, it seems, is to make public awareness about the differences between films and real

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. People should understand that not all real

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scenarios finish with a happy ending and taking an example by movies is not

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a good idea. It is obvious that films with violent contents cannot be banned, because myriad of people who watch them correlate with the characters and want to watch them.

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, prevention of films with violence will damage the film industry completely.

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, public understanding is the most convenient solution, in my opinion. To sum up, the main issue that violent content in movies brings about is a tendency to commit crime, but it can be addressed when people realize the difference between

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and the movies.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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Television programs and movies have become saturated with violent content.What are some resulting social problems and how can we deal with them?

Fully explain your ideas

Many parents choose to teach their children at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its drawbacks?

Nowadays, many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problem can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep.

“Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminals from society.” To what extent do you support this view? You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Each government and authority gave funding to art society; however, some people including me are strongly of the opinion that this is a type of wasting money and it is not profitable action that all social class can use it.