You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
The diagram demonstrates the main properties that are used to recycle the organic compounds in order to give out fertilizers for the plants. In the first huge
container
there are nearly three gaps from each side to allow the air to move in and out easily, Actually, the incredible
container
is made up of plastic with
volume
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a volume
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approximately
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of approximately
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2 metres cube.
Furthermore
, the
second
step shows that the waste products are inserted inside the
container
through its upper neck. There are many types of
wastes
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waste
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like
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apply
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for instance
,
newspaper
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newspapers
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, grass and
also
food with height ranges
by
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of
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15 cm.
Moreover
, the vast large
container
is supplied by both nitrogen and mainly hot water.
Then
the
container
is covered and heated for
long
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time
for
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example, six months and the steam can escape through the holes present
in
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on
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the
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both sides.
Finally
,
after
this
long process is ended the waste product become compost and now can be used as
a fertilizers
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a fertilizer
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for the yards.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words container with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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