You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The diagram demonstrates the main properties that are used to recycle the organic compounds in order to give out fertilizers for the plants. In the first huge
container
there are nearly three gaps from each side to allow the air to move in and out easily, Actually, the incredible container
is made up of plastic with volume
Add an article
a volume
approximately
2 metres cube.
Change preposition
of approximately
Furthermore
, the second
step shows that the waste products are inserted inside the container
through its upper neck. There are many types of wastes
Fix the agreement mistake
waste
like
Change preposition
apply
for instance
, newspaper
, grass and Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
also
food with height ranges by
15 cm.
Change preposition
of
Moreover
, the vast large container
is supplied by both nitrogen and mainly hot water. Then
the container
is covered and heated for long
time Change the article
a long
for
example, six months and the steam can escape through the holes present Add the comma(s)
,for
in
Change preposition
on
the
both sides.
Remove the article
apply
Finally
, after
this
long process is ended the waste product become compost and now can be used as a fertilizers
for the yards.Correct the article-noun agreement
a fertilizer
fertilizers
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words container with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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