The chart below shows the different level of post school qualification in Australia
The chart below gives information about various
estimate
of post-school experience in Australia and Fix the agreement mistake
estimates
percentage
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the percentage
rate
of two gender
who had them in 1999.
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genders
Overall
, when looked
at the table in general, there are contrasts in maximum and minimum rates. Wrong verb form
looking
While
shilled vocational credentials
is
in the highest amount for Change the verb form
are
males
, it is in the lowest rate
for females in 1999. Similar to this
contrast, the highest percentage in
undergraduate Change preposition
of
credentials
is for females, while
the lowest rate
in this
diploma
is for males
in the same year.
When looked
at the chart for Wrong verb form
looking
males
in detail, a
skilled vocational Correct article usage
the
credentials
percentage which has the highest raterate
for is 90%. Correct your spelling
rate rate
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This
rate
is followed by postgraduate
Correct article usage
the postgraduate
credentials
rate
with
%70 in 1999. The lowest Change preposition
of
rate
for males
is an undergraduate diploma
in 1999. Just after
this
rate
, the second
lowest rate
for male
is Fix the agreement mistake
males
bachelor’s
degree.
When Correct article usage
a bachelor’s
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at the chart for females in detail, as I mentioned in the Wrong verb form
looking
overall
paragraph, maximum
and minimum Correct article usage
the maximum
rate
are Fix the agreement mistake
rates
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the exact
exact
opposite. Change the adjective
exactly
Maximum
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The maximum
rate
is undergraduate credentials
and minimum
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the minimum
rate
is a skilled vocational diploma
in
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apply
this
year. These rates are respectively, followed by bachelor’s
degree which was the Correct article usage
a bachelor’s
second
highest rate
and by postgraduate diploma
which was the second
lowest rate
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