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Many people feel that students should learn from online materials while others feel that it is better to use printed materials.

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With the concern being expressed over whether using electronic books, which are not inefficient tools in
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 to read new materials on the internet or printed materials are available to reading for all aged people. I came to an understanding that use of the electronic books play significant roles in learning majority
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 not only from outside world, but
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 from internal world for students
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, it is believed that government and non-governments supply children with printed materials which are very convenient and, these contribute greatly to learning more, as well as printed materials are mainly written by the well-regarded author,
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, these materials are eminently believable in
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 to learn news, articles, literary work as well as the negative impact is substantially less compared to online materials for our health. Even if online materials cover our life, there is disproportionate
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,
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, a good deal of
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 may be fake. Apart from
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, they contribute the deterioration of health.
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, it is understandable why using online resources are effective methods in
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 to receive much
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. Which is posted is based not only on education but
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 on other fields.
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 printed materials have a number of advantages to learn new
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, these materials may have demerits.
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, if people use the internet in
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 to receive
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, they basically spent a lot of time by using websites. To state, learning materials based on the internet is very favourable. They contribute greatly to the study of
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 external world. In conclusion, online studying and using printed resources plays a significantly vital role in people's lives due to resource availability.
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, both methods would be beneficial for children to develop literacy skills

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