Some people believe that history always repeat itself.

Some people think that every time

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remake itself. The events which have already happened in the past always repeat in future by own. I agree with

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statement to a large degree. It will always repeat it as many times as it can. I believe that

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history

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repeats for the sole purpose of teaching people where they went wrong and showing them how they have changed.

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History

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, has a lot of legacies and minor events that just keep happening in so many different ways, that one would not believe or understand it's repetition.

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History

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does not really change, it is more of a change in the thinking about people and how they act.

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urbanization

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in India,

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urbanization

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came during Harappan civilization which followed by Vedic period.

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developed the

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with the development of the Mahajanapadas. The

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came during Gupta's Golden Age. So the

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urbanization

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is still repeating by itself due to several reasons. The injustice of the past is revealed in the present.

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is a record of the past, especially in connection with human race

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as war, poverty, social movements.

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, the pandemic, in every century the pandemic could occur in the world and can take many life's with it. As these days, we are going through Covid 19.

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is the

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which repeat by itself. The bad things done by people, nature or

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reminds people where they are wrong. To conclude,

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History

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remake by its own. Every person could know about the past and present with

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a history

. It always repeats and always keep reminding us about the ancient wars, natural disasters and pandemic. Every person able to take decision by looking at the

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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290 words

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Some people believe that history always repeat itself.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other part of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What problems does this cause? Can you suggest some solutions to this issue?

Some people say that women should not be allowed to work in the police force. Do you agree or disagree?