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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Omotola, I hope you are doing great and enjoying the weather. I got your letter concerning the noise emanating from my apartment and thought to explain the reasons and
also
 apologise.
First
, the major cause of the disturbance is a broken speaker which I've been unable to fix for a few reasons.
Then
, there is the frequent ruckus from my kid sisters, often quarrelling on flimsy issues.
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 I have asked them to quit their fights and seize turning on the bad appliance, they’ve refused to listen. Henceforth, I will lock the speaker away somewhere they can't access and separate their rooms to prevent frequent brawls between them. I really do hope these work because I wouldn’t like to send them back home just yet. Thank you for choosing to write
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 of a confrontation and I hope you accept my apology. Yours faithfully, Muslima.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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