More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
It is true that wild animals are on the edge of extermination to a greater extent as well as on the threatened list. There are
variety
of possible reasons for the extinction of wildlife, but steps can definitely be taken by Suggestion
a variety
government
to tackle this
problem.
In my opinion, three main factors are associated to
eradication of nature animals. Suggestion
with
Firstly
, Unsustainable growth of population
need inhabitants for living Suggestion
the population
purpose
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purposes
Consequently
, people cut down enormous areas of rainforest which destroys increasing amount of wildlife habitats. Secondly
, wild animals often experience different type of danger
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danger, such
such
as overhunting
of animals, excessive heating
overheating
overharvesting
, and introduction of invasive species and so on. Therefore
, it causes wild animals
life in danger. Suggestion
animal
animal's
Furthermore
, greenhouse gases make environment polluted that is
unbearable for some species. As a result
, animals’ life can be uninhabitable.
There are several solutions to those worrying problems and I firmly believe that the change must start with the government
. Natural areas and wild animals should be protected by the authorities. A second
measure would be creating strict laws for those people who are involved with shooting animals for their pleasure as well as the food source. Although
scientists are researched on some offensive species but
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species, but
administration
should Suggestion
the administration
look upon of
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look upon
this
matter so that they can stay out of this
new producing problem. Finally
, government
campaigns should promote awareness of planting trees regularly and imposing rules against pollution.
In conclusion, the problem of extinction of wild animals will continue to arise
.move upward
rise
However
,
with the right action taken by Accept space
,
government
the issue can be tackled sensibly and easily.Submitted by mahamudzisan on
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