You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, Describe the situation Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work. Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with regards to the room, I have been allotted in the hostel of your college. Sir, my name is Palak Khati, and I am a
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student of Bachelor of dental surgery. During my admission, I choose to use the accommodation facilities provided by the institution, as I did not want to waste ample time in travelling back
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home, but I am thoroughly disappointed as my nightmare has turned into a reality. My roommate, Natasha, prefers to party, she usually gathers her friends, and create a nuisance in the room. Upon, being requested to lower down the volume, they all bullied me,
as a result
, I was not able to prepare for the weekly test, which contributes twenty marks to my final assessment. Sir,
this
has happened the
third
time and I Am not ready to bear any insult. It would be massively appreciated, if you could shift me to a single bedroom, with an attached bathroom. I think it would be better to get one on the
second
floor as it is a quieter place to study. I hope immense action will be taken. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Palak Khati.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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