: The two maps illustrates the changes of a school campus from 1985 to 2012

: The two maps illustrates the changes of a school campus from 1985 to 2012
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The two diagrams show the construction innovation of a school campus from 1985 to 2012. In general, it can be seen that the changes involved the addition of several infrastructures
as well as
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the growth in student numbers.
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with, there were 1500 students attending the school in 1985 and in 2012, the total number of pupils went up by 800 students after the innovation.
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, in 1985, the Southern area was nearly fully covered by a playing field.
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, 27 years later, the playing field was narrowed down to make room for a swimming pool and a fitness club.
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, back in 1985, the school had only a 2-story block situated in the west, but in 2012, one more story was added to the original classroom block and more classrooms were built to accommodate a larger quantity of students.
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, in 1985, in the northeast of the campus, there were an office and a library.
In addition
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, after
27-year
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a 27-year
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period, the office remained, but the library was transformed into
the
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computer room.
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, there were two parking areas in 1985, but
comparing
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to the past, the larger one which was in the North was reconstructed
to
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into
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a new one with
semicircle
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a semicircle
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shape and the smaller car park was demolished to grow trees.
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