Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1. Apologize for damaging the product. 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how are you going to fix the issue.

Dear Sarah, Sorry, it’s taken me so long to write to you, but at

last

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I put pen to paper to explain why I haven’t returned that

camcorder

I borrowed from you. To be honest, I’ve been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you. I have to own up that I damaged the

camcorder

accidentally. I know how important that

camcorder

is for you as it was passed down from your late father. What happened is that, I went to Jadayu Rock Park with my family and we were having fun and capturing beautiful memories through the

camcorder

, in between a boy came from nowhere, hit me so hard that I lost

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control and fell down on a rock along with the

camcorder

. During that misfortune event, the

camcorder

’s body got damaged. I’ve spoken to the authorized dealers,

then

gave the

camcorder

to repair after the assurance got from them that the replacement of the body without affecting the functionality. Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get it back

week, and

then

I’ll send it on to you. Again, I’m extremely sorry for the delay in telling you and apologize for the erratic incident that occurred. I hope you can forgive me. Best Wishes Ann Maria

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8 paragraphs

214 words

8.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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