Many people believe that lecture halls have been replaced by online learning. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that teaching in instruction
halls
to large numbers of
students
is outdated and that
instead
, those should take place exclusively on the internet.
This
essay disagrees with the above statement.The reasons why instruction
halls
are better than online learning
explained
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in
following
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paragraphs. Learning via computer is the best way, but
this
way goes wrong in several situations.First and foremost,
students
are distracted easily when
teacher
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the teacher
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gives an important lecture online to
students
.If
students
are learning through online sources
then
they will sometimes do
lot's
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of things at the moment
such
as
students
are talking with their friends.
Therefore
,
students
are not able to concentrate on their studies.
For example
, 72%
students
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of students
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all over the world cannot focus on their lessons because they are distracted
while
online lectures.
However
, there are some
reason
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reasons
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why address
halls
are better than online learning.
Firstly
,
students
can get a good environment in classrooms.
Besides
,
students
cannot talk with their friends because at
this
time they are under pressure
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teachers.
Moreover
,
students
are asked questions to teach and they
received
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full guidance
of
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those questions. If
students
are learning about
computer
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computers
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then
they do not know about
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practicals
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.
For instance
, in the UK there are many
students
who
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prefer
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to learn in the classroom
instead
of online sources and
this
ratio has increased significantly in
this
country.
To conclude
, there are many consequences when
students
are learning via the internet because of that I disagree with the statement.
However
, all over the world, people give first priority to the lecture
halls
nowadays.
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