Many people believe that lecture halls have been replaced by online learning. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that teaching in instruction
halls
to large numbers of students
is outdated and that instead
, those should take place exclusively on the internet.This
essay disagrees with the above statement.The reasons why instruction halls
are better than online learning explained
in Add a missing verb
are explained
following
paragraphs.
Learning via computer is the best way, but Correct article usage
the following
this
way goes wrong in several situations.First and foremost, students
are distracted easily when teacher
gives an important lecture online to Add an article
the teacher
a teacher
students
.If students
are learning through online sources then
they will sometimes do lot's
of things at the moment Change noun form
lots
such
as students
are talking with their friends. Therefore
, students
are not able to concentrate on their studies. For example
, 72% students
all over the world cannot focus on their lessons because they are distracted Change preposition
of students
while
online lectures.
However
, there are some reason
why address Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
halls
are better than online learning. Firstly
, students
can get a good environment in classrooms. Besides
, students
cannot talk with their friends because at this
time they are under pressure of
teachers. Change preposition
from
Moreover
, students
are asked questions to teach and they received
full guidance Wrong verb form
receive
of
those questions. If Change preposition
on
students
are learning about computer
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computers
then
they do not know about practical
. Fix the agreement mistake
practicals
For instance
, in the UK there are many students
who preferred
to learn in the classroom Wrong verb form
prefer
instead
of online sources and this
ratio has increased significantly in this
country.
To conclude
, there are many consequences when students
are learning via the internet because of that I disagree with the statement. However
, all over the world, people give first priority to the lecture halls
nowadays.Submitted by jsp9896 on
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