Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education is a vital element in a child's development. Over the past years, there has been a lot of
option
Suggestion
options
on how the parents want their children to attain an excellent education.
Hence
it brought the argument on being
homeschool
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homeschooled
and being enrolled in a
school
.
Although
homeschooling provides much freedom for the children to learn on their own
time
without limit, being enrolled in
school
will provide them much of the resources that are available in a
school
set up. Homeschooling has been a practice throughout history, as the mother serves as the
first
teacher. At the present, homeschooling has been a choice for parents who commonly not satisfied with the
school
system. It provides
learning freedom,
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learning in freedom,
giving children enough
time
to focus on one topic at the
time
as well as giving them enough rest periods. Commonly it is facilitated by the mother, giving them a chance to spend much
time
with their children creating a great bond.
Moreover
, making them aware of the children’s aptitude, attitude and abilities, making it easier to come with the individualised lessons and facilitate one-on-one tutorial. Another benefit of it is that it helps in reducing emotional pressure brought by bullies, peer pressure and boredom.
On the contrary
,
this
requires a full attention by the parents, limiting their
time
to work.
Thus
, requires parents to be creative in facilitating the lesson in order to gain interest and children's attention in each lesson. In the fiscal note,
although
you are not obliged to pay for tuition fees, being homeschool is expensive as you need to buy certain educational resources that are easily available in
school
settings. On the other side, attending
school
provides a lot of positive aspects; one of
this
is that the
school
provides a wide range of up to date educational resources.
Moreover
, teaching is facilitated by a well-trained teacher that can provide effective teaching strategies.
Although
bullies and peer pressure are present in the
school
settings,
this
will help children to be socially exposed to these factors,
thus
, giving them a chance to cope with it and
further
gain their confidence and high self-esteem. To sum it up, both choices has its positive and negative side, but in my opinion, attending
school
provide a wide range of necessary information as well as skills that children will help them develop well. Even though attending
school
is beneficial, education supplementation from home will help students to attain a high level of education.
School
and home teaching will greatly help students understand more and help them mould their character and attitudes that will help them in the near future.
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