Some people believe that restoration of old buildings costs too much; we should demolish them and build new ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Weather

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To

renovate former buildings or completely flatten them is a controversial issue. Some people assume that refurbishment of old structures

specifically

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specific

buildings that require more expenditure ought to knock down in order to build new ones. In

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essay, I will strongly disagree with

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proposition. Maintenance of old buildings is far better option to opt because it is linked to cultural heritage and civilization of past decades. Culture and civilization of any country are actually the identity of any country and

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do possess historical significance. By preserving monuments, it would be possible to keep reminding citizens about their generations and

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letting them

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connect

with their historical background. In short, preserving

old buildings

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the old buildings

is more likely to be advantageous for future generation.

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, old structures are main source of revenue in terms of tourism. Rightfully,

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structures

are attract

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attract

are attracting

are attracted

tourists

resulting

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Resulting

in more and more chances of earning money spent by tourists and ultimately increasing source of

revenue which

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revenue, which

is, in turn,

favorable

encouraging or approving or pleasing

favourable

for any government and eventually for a country.

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,

eradication

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Eradication

of buildings is acceptable to those structures which are impoverished and would cost more for restoration purpose.

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,

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the construction

of new projects

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as new housing schemes or highway would be

better option

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a better option

the better option

better options

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places

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. To conclude, it is considered that

repairing

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the repairing

of monuments is redundant and should be torn down.

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,

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my opinion, it is, rather, preferable to conserve old structures than completely eradicating

them thereby

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them, thereby

safeguarding

cultural heritage

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the cultural heritage

of any society.