Some people say that music is a good way of bring people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are few people who believe that
music
is the best way to bring different cultures and age peoples together. In
this
essay I would like to express my opinion and provide with suitable examples.
Firstly
, I strongly agree with
this
statement. As it creates an atmosphere where everyone sit together and relax. It gives opportunity to interact with other peoples.
Music
is not just made of sounds, I believe, most of them have meaning in them.
For instance
,
Music
Suggestion
the music
the Music
produced in India and Punjab I believe have more meaning in their
music
, as it reflects the
culture
, reality, emotion and many more. By listening to
such
music
some time, even it can bring peoples and friends close.
Secondly
, there is
such
music
which talks about emotion and feelings which even closes the gap between parents and children. It can tell the value of our loved ones.
For example
, in the Punjab
music
video was produced talking about, how much your mother care and love you and give birth in pain, to which son leave's behind and go far away.
Such
songs tell us how wrong we are and what we should do. To summarize, there are songs which are not good enough to see with family due to the content in the
music
videos or due to the lyrics, but not all songs are of
such
kind there are many other songs which create and make bonds more strong when the whole family can listen, or your all friends can listen. Some
music's
Suggestion
music
videos, even talk about
culture
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a culture
which give us knowledge about our
culture
as well as other cultures.So I strongly agree with the statement that
music
brings people together of all
culture
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cultures
and age.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural diversity
  • harmony
  • integration
  • bridging gaps
  • foster
  • ignite
  • embrace
  • communicate
  • celebrate
  • appreciate
  • inclusivity
  • universal language
  • emotional resonance
  • shared experiences
  • intercultural dialogue
  • intergenerational connections
  • cultural exchange
  • catalyst
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