Write a letter to a local authority by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. -Mention about the current sports facilities available -What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced? -How would the new sports facilities be a help for the people in your age group?

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

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letter to request you to provide a basketball net in the playground of City Hall Town, North Area, which can be an additional

sports

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sport

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for young age who love to

persue

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pursue

peruse

thier

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their

career in a

basket ball

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basketball

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sport. As our place has cricket field and proper cover net where youngsters can practise free of cost.

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these proper sitting arrangements, fresh water is

accessiable

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accessible

for everyone. The senior

citizen

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easily use

West

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side of the playground for

thier

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their

yoga and

walk

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. I would like to request you to add a basketball net in the playground which can be free and beneficial for all who prefer to practise. As for now, the youth have no place to practise for it except the nearest Globo sports centre where we are asked to pay monthly membership which is pretty costly for us. With the help of these additional sports facilities, we would be able to do daily practice for upcoming tournaments in

city

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, which could be a great win for our area. Our team is doing hard work as our motive is to bring the trophy

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our town. Looking forward to your prompt action. yours faithfully, Kim

richard

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Submitted by jagjeet virdi on Sat Dec 21 2024

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task achievement

Ensure the letter covers specific details about why the facilities are needed, such as mentioning any growing interest or number of participants.

coherence cohesion

Use transition words and phrases to ensure smooth flow between paragraphs and ideas.

task achievement

The letter effectively addresses the task by specifying both the existing facilities and the need for additional sports options.

suitable writing tone

The letter maintains a formal tone, which is suitable for addressing a local authority.

greeting and closing

Clear and concise closing paragraph that effectively sums up the request.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

203 words

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