some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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that parents should teach kids about humanity and the most common ways to be an essential and appropriate person among others.

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, there is another

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that studying at

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and getting a knowledge about humanity from

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teachers is the best place to carry out

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. In my opinion, it is a good idea that kids should get educated about society from their parents. It would be superb to get experience from people who grow up you because they passed a great way in order to be an important individual among other people. The

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view, in terms of getting much more knowledge about society a few people consider that it would be better parents to educate their kids about moral and

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of view, parents have a great experience and they know much better than whoever how to behave among public and how to be a person who will contribute to the development of mankind.

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, they can tell their kids about the mistakes which they had done in the course of their life and share invaluable experience which they have. The

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view is that teachers or someone else in educational organizations should teach kids how to avoid mistakes, and develop their own sense of being a good individual among public and contribute as much as possible in order to build a bright future. They think so because

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might be the best place to learn it,

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, kids will read literature which is playing an essential role in developing a sense of decency, civilised behaviour. Or while they are studying at

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they can make a mistake or they might have a bad behaviour which will be corrected by the teacher and they will be told about the rules of behaving in public. Teachers will help kids develop their skills and

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out on mistakes that they have made. In conclusion, I would say that both of

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fact, In my opinion kids had better to get an education from parents because no one except parents will take care of kids, and they will do their best in order to grow up an ideal individual.

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teachers will teach kids how to be a helpful person in public as well,

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is not enough, because there a lot of kids who study at

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and teachers will have no time to each of them and it can lead to some bad consequences.