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It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the country side. Discuss both sides .

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Recently, there are some agitations about a suitable place for one to reside. Some agreed that living in an urban increases standard of living, while some quarters contradict that opinion by proving rural is less stressful and environmentally friendly for anyone.
This
 essay will discuss both sides. On the one hand, there are a quite number of people that are strongly agreed in a standard life of living can only be experienced in the modern cities.
This
 set of people
further
 explained that residing in an urban is a necessity for mankind.
This
 is because people deserve to experience with the modern world in terms of modernization and advancements of technologies.
As a result
, living in a city is the only way to get any 21st-century inventions.
For example
; it is easy for people living in the city to move around with different modes of the transportation system,
such
 as light-train, metro-Buses and so on.
On the other hand
, Some few people disputed the previous notion by saying living in the village is the best place to get less stress and enjoy the natural benefits that nature has to offer. They
further
 explained that staying in a rural town is healthy for mankind as there is little or non-daily life-threatening issues
such
 as; inhaling fumes from manufacturing companies and trailers.
Furthermore
, they believe people living in the countryside live longer than people residing in a city because they have fewer responsibilities. To sum up, the argument of people supporting living in an urban proved that it enhances the standard way of living in terms of technology.
This
was
Suggestion
Was
 contradicted by certain concerned citizens that claimed lives in a rural area elongate life and climate-friendly.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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