Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Formative years
Autonomy
Fulfillment
Wisdom
Significant choices
Exploration
Financial responsibilities
Deeper relationships
Personal growth
Accomplishments
Character development
Life milestones
Adulthood
Adolescence
Carefree nature
Achievements
Life satisfaction
Stress-free
Independence
Responsibilities

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