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Advances in health and biology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Scientists and developers around the world have always been discovering and implementing innovations in all parts our
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, on the surface, today people live longer and have more comfortable surroundings;
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, if we look deeply, in the past people seldom were ill and used to live longer without all modern innovations.
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, I partly agree with the topic statement because many facts demonstrate that modern age has many drawbacks for
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 of all, few people can deny the fact that presently breakthroughs in the medical and technology areas allow people to live longer and more comfortable. Many deadly pandemics,
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, many years have not been bothering people.
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, computer-based technologies that have implemented everywhere allow facilitate many processes, which used to overburden the
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 of people.
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, people cannot ignore that presently we live in better
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 owing to many breakthroughs everywhere, but is not the best. Notwithstanding all innovations present
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 is not the best due to people presently have many troubles with health,
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 new pandemic or mutation in children, and global problems with climate changes and a level of pollutions. Many children,
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, have been noticed were born with various deviation that are incurable and often deadly.
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, elderly people tend to live longer, even without using all new improvements
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, all innovations have been bringing all the
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 not only a positive result, but
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 a negative.
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, people today live in more turbulent
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 with an unpredictable future, thereby probably people in the past lived even better than presently. To conclude, in the account of many innovations presently make the
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 of people better and longer,
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time
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 seems to be the best in
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, all innovations have been bringing all the
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 not only improvements and profits in all part our
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, but
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 plenty drawbacks
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 as an enormous level of pollutions and other global problems.
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, I can partly agree with the statement that
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time
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 is the best, and I believe that eventually all these improvements will give people
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 best of the best in
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, but it is not today.
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