Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both sides & give your opinion.

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By developing technology like the Internet, we have seen increasingly a large number of people utilize it as a way of getting new acquaintances and converse with others persons.

This

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invention has brought benefits but

also

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, downside which will be explained below. For of all, the Internet is an enormous advantage for shy or sheepish people.

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, with someone who is queasy in real life, social media might be a proper approach to get new friends.

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in front of a screen may be less stressful than talking to somebody face to face.

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, social media have reduced the importance of distancing. Ours eldest were only capable to meet people who lived surroundings.

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, currently the new generation can send message to foreigners who live far away.

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, many websites have special purposes. As

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a results

, If I enjoy surfing, It is will be possible for me to talk with a group of persons who are fond of surfing like me. Despite the fact that, Internet it’s a great find to connect each one, some drawbacks must be mentioned.

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, sitting day and night alone in front of laptop might be risky for users.

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example without

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example, without

any connexion with real people,

illness problems

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illness, problems

might be developed by

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a human - being

human - beings

. Interactions are

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the vitals

for everyone, its why we should not underrate it. To conclude, its undeniable that

Internet

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the Internet

has been an outstanding breakthrough to make easy socializing.

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, I think over the years, mental issues which have been induced by overtime

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the internet

, has been underestimated.

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