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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society.

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Violent films or TV shows should be controlled by the authorities to avoid side-effects for society. When those violent videos, photos or programmes might let young children mimic it, and cause negative emotions or shadowing-minds in their minds.
Therefore
, I agree that the government should censor
such
 programs and films, some amount of
violence
 can be reduced. There is no doubt that some
violence
 series or film could offer more entertaining effects or stimulating emotions for the audience as well. Many international films from Hollywood use the amount of those topics or relevant action, including their films to catch more people's eyes.
For example
, a lot of the Racing, the Hero movie- 'Speed and Race' and 'Nothing is impossible', it renders adolescents to learn, mimic.
Moreover
, it might be stimulating youngsters to a racing car or motorcycle in the real world. Because they believe it is cool to perform it and they want to try it with their friends.
On the other hand
, as kids, they watch more
violence
 or shadow films that might influence their thinking and mental development. A lot of
violence
 in the film could affect kids' behaviour, they might duplicate
this
 action with their peers in the school. Or could let their thinking be negative aspects, in the real instance, they become depressed, without energy and no more proactive. Those have profound effects on children. In conclusion, I agree that the material
of
Suggestion
on
 relevant
violence
 should be monitored by the government. Due to
violence
,
films
Suggestion
the films
 could lead people to mimic
effects
Suggestion
the effects
 on others so that they can harm our society.
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