The government have announced that it plans to build a new university. some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community

#government #plans #university #people #community #place

There is no denying that we as student need infrastructure

significantly but

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significantly, but

some problems will be faced when starting. On the one hand, building a university is

superb decision

Suggestion

a superb decision

to increase education in

this

era. Thousands of scholar gathers in one of university for studying to gather which make not only making a chance of business but

also

going up economy in that region.

Moreover

, most of them prefer to take an education in the hometown than on the outside of their territory.

Likewise

, people who do not have

fund

Suggestion

funds

pay rent house or dorm to stay making

huge decision

Suggestion

the huge decision

to find the best university where more closed with their hometown in other to be easier and cheaper.

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Finally
In a nutshell
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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The government have announced that it plans to build a new university. some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community

Include an introduction and conclusion

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.

Studying art in school improves students’ performance in other subjects because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That’s why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?