The government have announced that it plans to build a new university. some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community

There is no denying that we as student need infrastructure
significantly but
Accept comma addition
significantly, but
some problems will be faced when starting. On the one hand, building a university is
superb decision
Suggestion
a superb decision
to increase education in
this
era. Thousands of scholar gathers in one of university for studying to gather which make not only making a chance of business but
also
going up economy in that region.
Moreover
, most of them prefer to take an education in the hometown than on the outside of their territory.
Likewise
, people who do not have
fund
Suggestion
funds
pay rent house or dorm to stay making
huge decision
Suggestion
the huge decision
to find the best university where more closed with their hometown in other to be easier and cheaper.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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