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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Disability is prominent in society and it is important to live and work in communities, that provide necessary supports. Disabled or not, all people are capable of doing great things with the life they have been given, but without respect they will think that they aren’t capable of handling challenges and struggles. People should learn to respect and reverence for every human mind. The problem isn’t the person’s disability, but society’s view of the person’s abilities.
Although
, people living with some type of disability may not have the opportunity to live life in the same way that we do. Disability simply requires a little creativity and resourcefulness and a lot of hard work and determination.
For example
, disabled students.
This
 can be hard on parents, schools, communities, and above all the children themselves. Students with learning disabilities are faced with several obstacles during their educational careers.
Therefore
, it is extremely important to develop educational approaches that optimize their learning experience. Society has a tendency to view individuals with disabilities as incapable of making contributions to the world. Some of the greatest contributions that have been made in
this
 world have come from people living with various types of disabilities, proving that their creativity and ingenuity are invaluable. We are all unique in our own way, and we all possess the potential to have a positive impact on the world. Every individual should be allowed to pursue their own interests and develop their own strengths, rather than focus on what does not interest or apply to them. Just because they are not so great in certain areas, it doesn’t mean they should feel inferior or be made to feel bad about themselves. They all are capable of doing great things, no matter what disabilities they have.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Harmony
  • Melody
  • Rhythm
  • Socio-cultural
  • Artistic expression
  • Cognitive development
  • Soundtrack
  • Moral implications
  • Acoustic ecology
  • Intellectual property
  • Authenticity
  • Commercialization
  • Media literacy
  • Sensory overload
  • Acculturation
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